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Across
1. Williams given usual covers. (5)
4. Aromatic resin vehicle has speed zero. (7)
8. Increase in Zimbabwean dance music leads to extra rain from God of thunder. (7)
9. Concealed in derelict antique. (5)
10. Short as lettuce. (3)
12. Water tank's bluish-green drink contains iodine. (8)
13. Yellow bus driver got towed, in part. (4)
14. All points used to stitch. (4)
15. Movie ends with alien encounter. (4)
18. The outdoors has nothing to enclose. (4)
20. Argue endlessly about tomato sauce. (4)
23. Wax clean before day's end. (4)
25. Mesh latch for jam. (8)
27. We object to a New World. (3)
28. Complete issue. (5)
29. Most aristocratic snob let out. (7)
30. New York City, over there, has a king for five hundred seconds. (7)
31. Soil tossed at her. (5)

Down
1. Mythical weapon has velocity to half-open door badly. (5)
2. South Australian islands originally known by quiet melody. (7)
3. Awkwardly runs at sci-fi awards ceremony. (6)
4. Oxford station where clouds with rain start to become cold. (6)
5. Disfigures broken arms. (4)
6. Composer of eight answers? (5)
7. Company involved in radar beacon for American mammal. (7)
11. Getting elusive fish back is a sign. (4)
13. Peace activist Bono bowled out. (3)
15. Freddie is happy about copper. (7)
16. Five points for effort? (3)
17. Encourages, for example, Gauss to strike. (4)
19. Raised structure houses single trailblazer. (7)
21. Sounds like you raced alongside American God. (6)
22. I bleed fudge that can be eaten. (6)
24. Prohibition about to stick in relay. (5)
26. A thousand carve sailing boat. (5)
27. Sudden rush removes small desire. (4)

This is my first cryptic crossword so constructive feedback is welcome.

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Grid:

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Wordplay explanations, with thanks to jafe for pointing out something important that I'd missed:

1a. substring. 4a. CAR containing MPH O. 8a. UP in JIT + E(-xtra) R(-ain). 9a. substring. 10a. COS is shortening of BECAUSE. 12a. AQUA + RUM containing I. 13a. substring. 14a. (NSEW)*. 15a. M(-ovi)E + ET. 18a. O + PEN. 20a. (ARGU(-e))*. 23a. RUB + (-da)Y. 25a. GRID+LOCK. 27a. US (accusative of WE) + A. 28a. double def. 29a. SNOBLET*. 30a. YON(D->K)ER + S. 31a. ATHER*.
1d. V + AJAR*. 2d. NE + P + TUNE. 3d. RUNSAT*. 6d. Holst composed The Planets, whose eight names are in the grid. (Holst's piece only has seven of them, since it doesn't count EARTH.) 7d. CO in RACON. 11d. NEMO<. 13d. (-b)ONO. 15d. CU in MERRY. 16d. double def. 17d. EG + G + S. 19d PIER containing ONE. 21d. U + RAN + US. 22d. IBLEED*. 24d. BAN about TO. 26d. K + ETCH. 27d. (-s)URGE.

And -- as jafe noticed, and I'm mortified that I didn't --

6d points out a theme here: either of the answers are names of planets in our solar system.

Some feedback as requested:

JIT in 8a is pretty damn obscure.
I like the misdirection in 13a where the bus driver, not the bus, is yellow.
14a seems to have the wrong tense.
18a is a nice find.
In 20a the def seems slightly out; surely a ragu is, importantly, a meat and tomato sauce.
In 25a, the wordplay is a bit too close semantically to the actual answer -- "gridlock" really is grid + lock, the grid in question really is a mesh, and the lock in question really is a jam. (We even use the term "traffic jam".)
I like the misdirection in 30a, where "New York City" means a city in New York State but not NYC.
1d is an indirect anagram. You're not meant to do that. Also, "ajar" doesn't mean "half-open door", it means "half-open".
I'm not sure that "Oxford station" can validly define CIRCUS in 4d, even though there is indeed a (London) train station called "Oxford Circus".
I'm not keen on "getting" in 11d. Also, while indeed the movie was called "Finding Nemo", IIRC it's not that Nemo was elusive, it's that he had been captured, which is kinda different.
One of the defs in 16d is a little iffy; a try scores five points but it's not true that it is five points.
I'm not totally convinced by the def in 17d; to egg on is to encourage, but I'm not sure that to egg is.
In 21d, "Sounds like U" is an adjectival phrase that describes U rather than a definition of it, which is a little naughty, though this is a fairly common variety of naughtiness.

(Note: for hopefully-obvious reasons most of the feedback is critical; that doesn't mean this was a bad puzzle; it was fun.)

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    $\begingroup$ In 6d, surely it's "eight [of the] answers"? $\endgroup$ – jafe Feb 7 at 14:44
  • $\begingroup$ Thank you for the feedback, this is very helpful, I will keep these points in mind for the next time. jafe is right about the interpretation of 6d. Part of my motivation was getting them all in there. I'm a little embarrassed about 14a, not sure what I was thinking. $\endgroup$ – hexomino Feb 7 at 14:59
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    $\begingroup$ Oh! I am a moron and therefore completely didn't notice what jafe points out, which is super-embarrassing. $\endgroup$ – Gareth McCaughan Feb 7 at 15:03
  • $\begingroup$ Answer amended appropriately. Apologies! $\endgroup$ – Gareth McCaughan Feb 7 at 15:06

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