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I created a new cryptic-crosswords grid :

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Clues

Down

  1. Original lullaby-free pilule for pastry. (3)
  2. Punctuation begins miracles within an unconscious state. (5)
  3. Slime around fruits. (5)
  4. Seize you by half-surprise. (5)
  5. Two bangs replaced by ring drums. (5)
  6. Maiden name of initial north-eastern element. (3)

Across

  1. Steel edge within a baby bat. (4)
  2. Venom occurs first inside private eye scion. (6)
  3. Protected? Concealed? I'm much nearer without Switzerland, Argentina and Eritrea. (6)
  4. Blend with thyme extremity to break through. (6)
  5. Mixed spas for snakes. (4)
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Here's the solution. $\ \ \ \ \ $

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Explanations:

1. PILULE with LUL (start of LULLABY) removed.
2. M (beginning of MIRACLES) inside COMA (an unconscious state).
3. Anagram of SLIME.
4. U (you) plus first half of SURPRISE.
5. [Not sure I've parsed this as Thrax intended] Second letter ("two") of BANGS replaced with O (ring).
6. Initial letters of North, Eastern, Element.
7. L (one end of STEEL) inside CUB.
8. O (first letter of OCCURS) insider PI (private investigator) plus SON (scion).
9. IMMUCHNEARER without CH (Switzerland), AR (Argentina), ER (Eritrea).
10. MERGE after E (one end of THYME).
11. Anagram of SPAS.

Some comments since Thrax has indicated in TSL chat that s/he's interested in feedback:

Mostly very straightforward, especially with almost every letter cross-checked. There's nothing wrong with that, but if you want to make your crosswords more challenging then reducing the amount of overlap will have that effect. The clues are generally fine in terms of "crossword grammar" but lacking in "surface reading": that is, they make sense as cryptic clues but not much sense as actual English. A couple of them have decent surfaces: "Slime around fruits", for instance. Most of them, not so much :-). It's often possible to improve the surface quite a bit while keeping the overall structure; e.g., suppose 2 had been "Short break in unconscious state: a miracle begins"; it's still not great but it's at least suggesting a coherent story: an unconscious patient flickers briefly into consciousness, and it's a miracle. More specific quibbles: I'm not keen on "original lullaby-free" meaning to remove the first few letters of "lullaby" -- it feels not quite grammatical. "Fruit" can be plural as well as singular, and would probably have been a bit better surface-wise. I'm not fond of "U" for "you", though it's not actually wrong. I'm not sure I've understood #5 quite right; if so, then it's a rather non-standard use of "two" and I'm not convinced "bongs" are "drums". (Bongos are drums. Bongs are noises made by a large bell or gong, or water-pipes for smoking drugs.) "Protected" and "Concealed" are kinda doing the same job, and that clue would I think have been better with only one of them.

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  • $\begingroup$ Too fast for me. I only had about 4 clues solved when I saw your answer pop up $\endgroup$ – James Webster Jul 17 '17 at 14:13
  • $\begingroup$ To judge from discussion in TSL chat. there are at least two other people who solved it more or less simultaneously :-). $\endgroup$ – Gareth McCaughan Jul 17 '17 at 14:15
  • $\begingroup$ where do you get Private Investigator? It's Private Eye that is written. I parsed that as Eye=I without an indicator. $\endgroup$ – Sid Jul 17 '17 at 17:07
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    $\begingroup$ @Sid; PI is an abbreviation for private investigator as in Magnum, P.I., Private eye is a colloquial term for private investigator. $\endgroup$ – M Oehm Jul 17 '17 at 17:28

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